Monday, January 19, 2009

The "but" in my Gran Torino review shows up much later than it should. It is the first sentence in the 4th paragraph: "Clint Eastwood's supposed 'final performance as an actor' did not quite reach the incredibly high standards that have been set for Eastwood with his legendary performances as Dirty Harry." I think that it comes this late because the structure of my review was off a little bit, I spent too much time summarizing the plot and I should have had my but before such a long summary. 
I think I would give myself a B- or so for this review. Given the chance to rewrite it I would definitely not summarize so much and would try to do a little more research so that I could write a more informed review. Also I would not use "I" and "you."

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